The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/09
Excellent, vivid story! I see why you are in Masters. Very enjoyable! Laura
Very, very good. Smooth writing. Sincere. The purple ring was a very symbolic piece to write the story around adding demensions to all of your characters. Enjoyed it.
You could feel the storm closing in and setting the scene for the story telling. I especially liked the explanation of the "magic" of the ring. Magic does indeed exist!
Neat story. Kind of reminds me of a story that could come from Mary Poppins!
11/16/09
You created a marvelous atmosphere here. And the story was realistic; real life is what happens, and what you described perfectly. Good dialogue, too.
Very sweet, very tender. I liked the ending, especially. Well done.
11/18/09
Wow...nice atmosphere and great writing. Love it!
11/18/09
A beautiful and tender story about important memories, and the objects that evoke them. Good job.