The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/09
Excellent, vivid story! I see why you are in Masters. Very enjoyable! Laura
11/16/09
Very, very good. Smooth writing. Sincere. The purple ring was a very symbolic piece to write the story around adding demensions to all of your characters. Enjoyed it.
11/16/09
You could feel the storm closing in and setting the scene for the story telling. I especially liked the explanation of the "magic" of the ring. Magic does indeed exist!
11/16/09
Neat story. Kind of reminds me of a story that could come from Mary Poppins!
11/16/09
You created a marvelous atmosphere here. And the story was realistic; real life is what happens, and what you described perfectly. Good dialogue, too.
11/18/09
Very sweet, very tender. I liked the ending, especially. Well done.
11/18/09
Wow...nice atmosphere and great writing. Love it!
11/18/09
A beautiful and tender story about important memories, and the objects that evoke them. Good job.