The Official Writing Challenge
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There is so much about this to like. Your descriptions are great and made it a very visual entry ... He waited, allowing Estron his theatrical pause and ... Estron looked to the clouds, suddenly illuminated under the next arc of light, making them appear to glow purple like a shaded lamp.

Oooh, and I got goosebumps when I read the last line. So good, so very good. Well done.
11/17/09
You kept my attention as if I was reading a page of a well-written novel. Terrific job.