The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/09
This is very nicely written. Your meter, rhyme, and thoughts are great. I especially like this stanza, "Our Lord and Saviour of the world -- Wore purple robes by force. -- An act designed by men to mock -- As scripture took its course."
11/17/09


Well written and reads so smoothly.

Truly loved the last stanza:

"But Jesus wears his gown of white
Not purple, red or blue
Pure and shining, white as snow
Radiant and true. "