The Official Writing Challenge
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Ahh Lydia is that how it was. I feel I've been shown an album with pictures of someone worth knowing.
I have cried through this whole story like a baby! I have been blessed beyond measure. I felt like I was there with those women. Oh Wow!
An enjoyable read on how it could have been. Note: Thytira is in Asia; the river where Lydia was baptized is near Phillipi in Macedonia, according to many commentaries. You have brought Lydia to life with your fine writing.
Excellent story!
A nice viewpoint on the story of Lydia. I found the reading to be somewhat choppy and at times I did not know who was speaking during the exchange with Paul, Silas and the ladies. A little more proofing and polishing.
A highly readable rendition of the Lydia story. Well done.