The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
I really liked this piece as a look at history from a different perspective. There were just a couple of places that needed editing because either a word was missing or the wrong word was used. But I love the message.
11/12/09
Your story unwraps and reveals every heart just moments before it begins beating with new life (salvation). Wow I love that sort of writing. Thanks.
The saving grace of Jesus speaks truth very loudly here in this beautiful story. Thank you!
11/18/09
Could use some proofreading and a little more content. Keep writing and getting better.