The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/09
I loved the recounting of the old wringer washers. It reminds me to be grateful for my washer and dryer now:) Great example of a well-known saying through a little girl's eyes.
I found this article to be quite good. I could see for a while where you were going but was not sure how you would get there. Very fresh story line of the washing
11/10/09
I love the message behind the story, but I really liked reminiscing about laundry day growing up, the "discrete" underwear and all. My little sister did get her hand smooshed in the ringer one day - ouch! Great story.
11/10/09
This is really very well done. The imagery is wonderful, and it builds well to the revealing conclusion. Good job.
11/11/09
Reminds me of my childhood right down to the girls innocent little mind. Well done.