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I loved the recounting of the old wringer washers. It reminds me to be grateful for my washer and dryer now:) Great example of a well-known saying through a little girl's eyes.
I found this article to be quite good. I could see for a while where you were going but was not sure how you would get there. Very fresh story line of the washing
I love the message behind the story, but I really liked reminiscing about laundry day growing up, the "discrete" underwear and all. My little sister did get her hand smooshed in the ringer one day - ouch! Great story.
This is really very well done. The imagery is wonderful, and it builds well to the revealing conclusion. Good job.
Reminds me of my childhood right down to the girls innocent little mind. Well done.