The Official Writing Challenge
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11/09/09
I love your idea but "I" in the story distracted me from the visit with the white crayon. I could see pictures as I read this. Cute.
Very cute! I could see this as the beginning of a children's series. I, too, could see illustrations in my mind as I read it.
11/09/09
I agree, great story to be used in Sunday School or Children's Church. Very creative idea.
11/09/09
I liked it, very clever!