The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/09
Is a sigh enough to convey what I thought of this because that's exactly what I did when I read this. **sigh** Love this story.
11/07/09
This is a beautiful, sentimental story. The descriptive writng made me feel as if I was looking over their shoulders. Nice job.
11/09/09
Precious story,So well done. The white gloves to symbolize purity, great.
Your writing style is so lovely and breathtakingly beautiful. I can only hope to capture some of the same sentiments in my own writing.
11/11/09
This is so beautiful - thank you. I long to share it with my own lovely daughter, also 'a tender twenty-two still carving an adult identity.'
11/12/09
Your message and story are beautiful! Congrats on your Editor's Choice, Beth!
Beth, congrats on your EC! This piece captivated me from the first line, drew me deep into the story, and finally left me full to the brim with satisfaction and delight. Genuine, artless, utterly beautiful!