The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/09
Very well written! Good job!
Great ending! "Pride goeth before a fall!"
11/11/09
Lots of suspense, and what's more white than a polar bear in a blizzard?

It felt more "tell" than "show" to me in several places.

That last image is a real kicker!