The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/09
Wonderful, wonderful story! Truly enjoyable, heartfelt, and one which should be passed down for generations! Very well written!
11/11/09
Not sure to comment about the content or just the writing. The writing was excellent, content was..let's just say I am very glad you met your knight in shining armour, but angel? I wish people would stop trying to fantazie scripture. Yes it's sweet and cute but not accurate. Yes I am a stickler for accuracy. If you see an angel I guarantee you won't be looking at his little wings, white or otherwise.
11/12/09
This is a fictional story, however, I believe my character realizes that her love is not an actual angel. She uses the term to describe this wonderful gift from God in the form of a person. I must agree with you C Clemons. We use the term angel more loosely than we should and I appreciate the reminder.
11/12/09
I think C Clemons is being too hard on you. All great literature is full of figurative language and it is obvious from the story you are not talking about a literal angel, but using a term of endearment for the person you love. This was a wonderfully beautiful love story and very well written. Good job and congrats!!