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Wow, powerful story!
A true story and so well written I was drawn on through the story even though I knew the end already. Excellent.
I didn't want to read it .... I know the ending - however it was well worth the read. No gore just the tension leading up to it and the hollow victory - if the Romans even called it that. Well done!
Excellent historical fiction! Very well-written.
Good job with setting up the scene! Nice use of strong nouns and verbs to describe.