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11/05/09
Nice twist at the end.
11/05/09
Great surprise ending!
11/09/09
Brave young lady--good for her!

I wasn't as clear on the final twist as your other readers are--so it's probably just me.

I admire young people who are bold in their faith!
11/10/09
Apparently her son, Benjamin, didn't share her faith. I think you've written this well. One thing I was not too clear on, if this was a public school, Mrs. Cochran was pretty vocal about the Bible. Regardless, I like the message of this, especially to the middle school crowd!
11/12/09
Very well done, Great twistat the end.