The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/09
Oh, this was really cute.

I felt some parts of the fairy tale would have been over the girl's head (more than the naive part) but that may just be me.

I liked the ending. But now I want to know... who's the one getting married??
11/01/09
Okay. So I just re-read the beginning. I figured out who's wedding it is. *blushes* Guess I read a bit too fast the first time. lol
11/01/09
Loved the way this mother was ready to tell her daughter a story even on such a busy morning. Mother/daughter relationships always make for a good story.

I like the part about the youg couple not having much money...I could truly relate to that!!! ROFL.

Great entry!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Cute story.