The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
This piece spoke of true love from a mother's heart. So glad you gave your MC a heart that appreciated her sacrifice.
10/30/09
This almost had me in trears - it s so beautiful. The last line is just wonderful.
11/02/09
Lovely story. Brought back memories of some of the stuff I had to wear when young. Me and the mates got round it by calling ourselves the patch gang. Thanks for the wake up call. Colin
11/02/09
Completely captivating! I was with Colin every horrifying moment. LOVE the ending.