The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/09
Good thoughts.
11/03/09
I can see this as an illustrated children's book! I love the loose rhymes (I should know the proper name by now) and the rhythm is just the right amount of bouncy. The message so clearly spelled out. Good job!
11/04/09
Thank you - loved this - I appreciate poetry that rhymes. Thanks. Colin
11/04/09
A joy to read that had me bouncing in my seat. Would be wonderful for a Sunday School lesson.
12/04/09
My grandchildren would love this!
12/04/09
Come to think of it, SO WILL YOURS!!!!!!
01/06/10
Wow!How great!Keep it up.Love sent,Justus