The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/09
I could just hear your MC saying, "D'ose nasty Green Thinks!" :) ... I had to smile at letting Cascade do the dishes and Calgon take her away. :) You have some cute images in this.
This one is my favorite! Oh how I can totally relate to everything in this story. I have two daughters and this is exactly how things went down!

"Since when did children get to tell their parents what they didn’t want to eat? Not in my day, Dawn thought as she paced the floor."

Change Dawn to Dan and we have a true story...LOL.

Everything about this entry is awesome!

Number 1 on my list!!!!!!!!!!!!!

May God bless and keep you writing such treasures!

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

I truly empathized with the mom's weariness as she herself struggled with the "green peas" in life. Terrific metaphors in this story, and believable characters. Excellent!