The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/09
Sweet story.
11/01/09
An interesting essay dedicated to a special person. I enjoyed reading it. If this isn't a true story, it sure reads like one. The voice is very natural. And I like the last line - great ending to meld the story plot to your theme!
Your story sounds very realistic. I like Mikey.
11/01/09
This brought back memories - my sister got lumbered with me and never let me forget it. She can tell a tale or two about me too.

I enjoyed this and like the mood. Thanks - Colin
I agree with another commenter who wondered if this might be true. Sure sounds like it might be.

I can relate as I have a sister who is twelve years older than I am.

This was an enjoyable, well written read. Love the last line.
Extremely well written and seems to be a possible "true to life?" Nicely done!
11/02/09
What a tender, authentic, sweet, sweet story. Lovely in so many ways.