The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
I found myself holding my breath as I read...
10/30/09
Wow, who would've thought an obscure verse about leprosy in the book of Leviticus could set the theme for such a vivid scene. Great job with the dialogue and description (your spacing between lines and paragraphs was good, too). Characters seemed real to me. Nice story.
10/31/09
Very nice and intersting! I think I saw only one small mistake that in no way take anything away from the story.

I think "loose" was supposed to be "lose"...unless I'm reading it the wrong way.


No big deal, though. The story flowed well and was a fun read.

Keep up the great work!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
11/02/09
This is great - loved it. Thanks for sharing this very real account of what happened back then and well written and told.

Colin
11/03/09
Your story touches the heart. Enjoyed the read. Nice job.
11/04/09
Whoa, very well done! Loved the Biblical story
11/04/09
I liked it very much. I hope you write more historical fiction using Bible themes.