The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Your word pictures and narration captured the thoughts of this not as yet acclimated Californian to his roots here in the Midwest. Many of us can relate.
11/01/09
I liked it. Great descriptions and real feeling.
11/02/09
This is a beautiful dreamy story which I have thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks

Colin