The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/09
I think I know that girl in black.

Good work.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

11/02/09
Enjoyed the story. Liked the twist at the end. Nice job.
11/02/09
Cute story of the conflicting feelings of loyalty and green envy.
Thanks for sharing. Colin
I like your writing style - flows nicely and easy to read. Great twist at the end of the story.
11/04/09
The opening grabbed me, quite forcibly too! Crisp sentences just fit so well with the emotion. Wasn't expecting that twist at the end either.
Wow. Just wow. Incredible twist at the end to pull the whole story together.

Great job!
11/04/09
Ilike your story telling. Well done.