The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
You got me--wasn't expecting that ending. Funny and entertaining.
One little hangup--didn't Charlie smell the real turkey cooking?
Oh, that was fun! Maybe Charlie had sinus issues. Heehee!
11/02/09
Good fun piece. Really enjoyed it. Thanks. Colin
11/02/09
Props to you, because this was so funny. Loved Pops, and the perfect twist...didn't see it coming at all. Tee hee!
11/04/09
Hilarious! Even the word Faturkey! Well done and ya got Charlie real good!
I've watched your writing get better and better...and now this great story! Congratulations on placing well-deservedly in EC.
11/05/09
AWESOME! Clever trick and great characters. I could really get a sense of each person from your writing, which is just sublime. Well deserved EC - way to go!
11/05/09
I enjoyed all your humor, beginning with your title! Congrats on placing with this!