The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how envy was embodied as a cape. Great visual for the reader!
10/29/09
Great message about how often we struggle with envy. I thought the main character was going to throw a brick threw the windshield of the Mini-Cooper. Glad she didn't. :-)

May God bless!

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
Really enjoyed this piece! You did a good job at showing how envy can overtake us.