The Official Writing Challenge
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That one got me..I did not expect the ending. Very good.
11/01/09
You got me. I love it when an author gets me like that. Super job creating a suspenseful mysterious plot, that ends with an eye-rolling groan - in a good way. Very well done. :)
11/01/09
Completely hoodwinked me. Wow! what an imagination. Thanks for sharing this unusual piece.
Colin
11/02/09
Yep, got me too! LOVE the creativity, and the skill it took to weave this together so perfectly. Super fun entry...
Clever, witty; great ending! I love your footnote too. Wonderfully written. This is my favorite so far.
Wow! I was sure I was in sci-fi future--had to kick myself for falling for your trick. Wonderful story!
11/04/09
You got us all good, I'd say! Excellent writing! Now I'll be looking for your next one after you throw your brick. Laura
11/04/09
Fun fun fun.Great ending!
Got me! Super creative and superbly written. Well done!
I had an inkling where you were going, don't know why. Even so, you kept me hanging until the end. Good writing.
11/04/09
Oh, I didn't expect that! You planted clues all the way, but I didn't catch on. Very effective, from beginning to end!
01/11/10
All I can say is...WOW! What a super job!! You are an artist!
Iloved it. I was thinking it sounds like a bug spray but that's too far out. But you managed to make a wacky idea believable and I totally loved it!