The Official Writing Challenge
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This reads almost like a Dr. Seuss book, only a little higher level. I can hear a narrator in my head too.

Very clever, oh, and the character Nip could be really funny, definitely smart. Is there a market for sequels to famous kid's books such as "How the Grinch....?" This could fit in that category.
I was captivated when "he grinned in the gloom of his midnight grotto. What a way with words! I loved the story, too!