The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Wow, my mind is swimming in a cartoon and commericial ocean. Very nice and twisty.

May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

11/02/09
What a funny ending. Thanks for the chuckle. Nice job!
Great ending!!! Great writing too by the way.