The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
I was waitin' for that bar room beat down. Glad it took a good turn.

Good writing!

May God bless!

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

11/02/09
Enjoyed! Thanks for sharing this. Brings back memories of my snooker days of youth. Thanks. Colin
11/02/09
Wow, great atmosphere at the beginning...I could almost smell the smoke. Glad old Burney set down his pool cue and tended to the Mrs. properly, lol. Wonderful writing!
11/05/09
Hi Patricia,
Thanks for your review on my fairly sheepish effort, but I enjoyed this Irish story, to be sure, to be sure.
I love the way you've brought us to deeper values without preaching.
Well done.