The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Good job! Well written!
10/29/09
Powerful message and delivered srongly. Excellant writing.
10/29/09
Very good. I kinda knew where it was going, but the excellent writing kept me reading and enjoying.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

10/30/09
Though your title predicted where your story was going, I truly enjoyed reading it from your MC's POV.
11/03/09
Oops, my editor caught this one - "...delivered strong". God bless and keep writing!