The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Enjoyed this cute tale. I liked the Irish dialect and the ending made me smile.
An enjoyable read! Believable characters & dialogue.

I think you might've meant to use the word "genteel" rather than "gentile"?

10/31/09
Great job. I can't imagine doing such a thing to anyone, but there are plenty of people who aren't timid like me. I guess it really is a harmless prank, but oh, how effective.