The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Very nice work!

"The only light shining, besides the television screen, would be the multicolored lights sparkling from the tree branches."

That was my house, for sure!

My mom was a big "The Sound of Music" fan, and I can't tell you how many times she would sing all the songs from that musical!

Great job.

May God bless and keep the writings coming.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

10/29/09
Well done. I can see the spacious place also being the hole left when Emily's mother died. Interesting parallel because when Maria ran it was back to the convent and Emily ran from God. They both ended up where they belonged though. Good job.