The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Great title, great story, and great ending. My only complaint is that I have a weak stomach and I actually felt sick a few times when I pictures animals and people getting slimed.

This was an easy read with some good comedy thrown into the mix.

May God bless and keep your creative spark flowing!

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
10/29/09
I enjoyed this story and consider myself warned.It was well-written up to the last line. I was good with seeing the kid finally get what he deserved and then the momentum just dropped for me with the reference to St. Patricks' Day. Overall, well written good story.
This was a fun one to read! Very unique take on the topic :)
11/02/09
Like to see this published. As a children's book it offers much. A handicap child with polio, a forgotten disease. Niles, the spitting llama, offered humor. Nice job!
I agree about the children's story idea... Niles has such a unique personality that he would be quite the entertaining read.
11/05/09
A thoroughly enjoyable read!