The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/09
Somber but well thought out. I don't see the necessity for all the ........, I think 2 or three ... would suffice.
10/25/09
I really enjoyed this story/poem. This was a very interesting take on the subject. The rhyme is very good, but I must agree that three dots would do the trick. Too many dots are distracting. Good job.
10/26/09
Loved this...dots and all. Your thoughts gave me a new appreciation for the raven. I enjoyed the poetical form of this piece. Very nice.
10/26/09
Excellent--I thought of the way Poe wrote about a raven, and this was a very interesting contrast.
10/29/09
This is perfect for the topic! You are very talented with poetry. I liked the form you chose. Excellent work! Congrats! (we have ravens here, they are so entertaining..........I will never look at them the same way again) :)
10/29/09
We don't tend to think of ravens as majestic birds, but you really made me "reconsider" how to look at them. Well done--congratulations!
You did a wonderful job with this topic. I think I'll have a better opinion of these noisy birds from now on. Congratulations!
Congratulations, Margaret! Nice to see you placing in the top 3 again!