The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/09
Okay I'm confused what did Lindsay do? The writing was good though.
10/26/09
Great object lesson!

This may have had a few too many characters for such a short story, but I still enjoyed it very much.
10/27/09
This brought tears to my eyes. The writing captured the pre-wedding jitters beautifully.
10/28/09
Loved the story, but I too want to know what Lindsay did! See how you drew us in! Good job!