The Official Writing Challenge
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Chilling tale depicting how quickly and subtly evil can destroy our lives. And now I'm shivering.
Exquisite writing. This reminded me of a recently released video showing Anne Frank watching out her balcony at a wedding taking place in the street below her apartment. I don't know if she also saw a black valise, but the portent of its presence is indeed chilling.
Oooo, chilling entry. I felt there was a little emotion lacking, but otherwise well-done!
Gripping story...definitely a black stain on history. You've brought this to life. Nice work!