The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/09
If there ever was "blackness" that was it! This is perfect for the topic. I enjoyed your writing from the boy's viewpoint and all the things I boy would do (like needing to eat.) :)
10/25/09
Suspenseful, you were so descriptive I felt as if I was there, I also liked this through the boy's eyes.
10/26/09
I really like Bible stories from unique, but plausible POVs. Well done!
10/27/09
Well done! When I was a child, I used to imagine myself following Jesus around during his ministry and write little stories about it, but I always shied away from picturing anything to do with his death. You captured the child-heart beautifully!
The descriptions are so vivid, I felt I was a witness. Very powerful writing!
10/31/09
Kellie, I'm going to feature this story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of November 23. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
11/29/09
This was powerful in the telling through the boy's eyes. So glad it was featured as I missed it the first time. Excellent use of the topic.