The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/09
You've brought to life what it must have been like for the common person during that day. This is so appropriate for the topic. Nicely done.
10/26/09
You have a great idea here--why not use the full 750 words and help us get to know your character better?

There were some confusing shifts from past tense to present and back.

Good read, and I definitely wanted more.