The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/09
I like this... such a unique take on the "black" topic. This is gripping. Nice work!
Well done! Great description of the real "black rider".
I appreciated that you used punctuation - a lot of poets don't, but it makes a poem easier to read. However, I don't think that you need the commas after the "so" at the beginning of the line. It breaks up the thought in a needless way.
Great poem!
10/26/09
I like how the short, choppy likes mimic a horse's galloping.