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For me, this was funny in a sad way. Families should be about accepting and loving each other "as is". Realistically I know that's usually not the case.
I loved your MC and the way your story unfolded.
Everyone should have an aunt and uncle like these two, don't you think?
No wonder why they gather there.
Very interesting take on the topic.

This points out, so well, how each of us see ourselves differently than other see us. I think, too, it shows how God must see us through the eyes of Jesus. This is a family I'd probably fit into quite well - after all, I'm a black sheet, too!
Love the family dynamics in this piece. You did a good job puling me in. Thumbs up.
Lots of great white space, snappy dialogue, a fantastic title. Loved your voice, really good story!