The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very good. I don't think it needed an author's note. Excellent account of the grim reaper. Am so glad I can pass him by with my Friend in White!
I really like the personification you used in this story, and the vivid details which bring the story to life. Great job!
Excellent personification! Very good story.
This isn't your usual style Josh, but it's definitely well done.

Loved your description of the Grim Reaper ,and loved the message. Thumbs up.
Extremely creative and interesting. The atmosphere could have been darker or creepier, given the MC, but maybe you held back on purpose?? Liked the beginning especially, the observations of his surroundings really brought depth to the character.
Good one, Josh. This is your best work yet. I particularly liked the way you portrayed the Reaper suffering as much as the souls he collected, and that there is one person he both fears and has no power over.
Wow, Josh! I really like it! You did very well, my friend. Can't wait for the rankings to see how you placed!