The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/09
Wow, quite a zinger of an ending!

This is great for sci-fi and end times fans...perhaps a bit weak on topic, though.

You've created some great characters!
Tautly written and very, very believable characters, especially Dalwyn - I really didn't like him and glad he got his just dessert in the end. What struck me was his anger (throwing the chair) it made me think there was some inner dialogue going on within him that he couldn't quiet. Looks like death may have turned up the volume on that station more than he could ever have imagined. Or, maybe Pauella's praying for him helped him in the end.
10/28/09
Oh my, justice was served. Very good sci fi story.
10/28/09
Heavy sci-fi! Loved it!
10/28/09
An exciting and interesting story! Love the sci-fi. I felt a little cheated by the end - it was very abrupt. But then I was reminded of some Bible stories that end in the same way, so who am I to judge? Very nice job!