The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/09
Whew! I was sweating it out with Sarah there for a bit!
Great job walking your MC through the conviction and ultimate surrender.
10/26/09
Great suspense and tension!

I may have missed it, but I didn't see the topic of "black" in here.

I can't imagine what this would be like, but your narrator was quite convincing!