The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/09
Wow--vivid, disturbing, extremely well-written.
A very vivid journey into the depravity of some mens' souls. You did not hold back, the punches were real and effective made even more so by your use of dialogue, setting and descriptions. Subject matter aside, the ability to write like this belongs in Masters.
10/28/09
Gripping writing - I was completely drawn in to the story. I was reminded of an old western, but with more raw details and "blackness". :) I'm a little confused as to why they killed Caleb? Was it because he killed the little girl before she could be "used"?