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Having never heard of the black/white swans, I found the story intriguing. Thanks for the footnote,I was pleased by the happy ending.
10/24/09
A wonderful story and even better, knowing it is true. I have seen black swans here in UK - they are incredibly beautiful!
10/26/09
Well done--thanks for the historical note, and for the epilogue.
10/27/09
in our darkest moments, it's amazing how prayer brings us back to the light. the footnote left me greatly encouraged.
10/27/09
You did a good job touching the heart with such deep feelings. Enjoyed the read.
10/27/09
You "hooked" me immediately and it was easy for me to form strong mental pictures.
10/27/09
I, too, was fascinated by your notes. Your ending filled me with hope. Well done!
10/28/09
I really like how you ended this, and then added the footnote. What encouragement, and what a testimony!
10/28/09
I love how you use the symbol of the black swan to describe your friend's near-death experience. So glad this story had a happy ending!
10/31/09
Kathryn, I'm going to feature this story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of November 9. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
11/10/09
Wonderful story of hope and God's faithfulness. Thanks for sharing.
That was beautiful! I love how with man things are impossible but with God all things are possible.
Beautiful and touching. Thank you for sharing.