The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/09
Very nice.
10/26/09
Oh, perfect!
10/27/09
I like the way we can share ourselves in poetry, especially the way we have come through experiences that result in a closeness to the Father and Son. Well done.
This reminds of the praise song "I See the Lord" which comes from the same scripture.

You did a great job making this come to life. Loved it.

10/27/09
I love your wonderful rhyme pattern. The verses from Isaiah about the burning coal are some of my favorites. Great work on this!