The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/09
Delightful!
10/26/09
Love the pacing of this--it' perfectly matched the subject matter.

"Coffee's" should have an apostrophe in the first stanze. That was the only little nitpick I found in this delightful (and exhausting) poem!
10/26/09
Very well written. I liked how you found so many different ways to use the theme throughout.