The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/09
Love the story... just found one mistake(no biggie) alligator's live in the South, not crocks.

Well written, made me feel like I was there...
10/26/09
Wonderful! Great job with the atmosphere and the dialect. This is my favorite so far on this level.
10/26/09
Well-written story with great dialogue. However, I didn't feel that the theme was tied in that well to the story, except in the title.
10/27/09
Enjoyed the dialogue. Good description of the swamp...reminds me of home. Down here in my neck of the swamp a 6ft. gator is considered small.
10/27/09
Delightful story with a great ending! :) Through your excellent tale-telling I could see the whole scene in my mind's eye!