The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/09
Not my cup of tea, but I thought it was well written.
10/26/09
Fantasy fans will really enjoy this well-written piece.

The problem with fantasy in 750 words is that there's too much of a "back story" that your readers have to infer. There was a lot here that I didn't understand.

I was intrigued by the characters here.
10/26/09
Interesting characters, but not enough room to tell what I would have liked to read more of.
10/27/09
I like the title you've given this! I can just imagine the seething that went on during the story.. this is perfect for "black."