The Official Writing Challenge
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This beautiful poem reads like a devotional. A wonderful reminder of the sacrifice that freed us all.
10/26/09
Beautiful imagery with the candle and the drop of blood.

Perhaps a tweak of the meter to make this flow more smoothly?

I love your title. Have you stopped by the new "Master Class" on poetry on the message boards? We'd love to have you!
10/26/09
Very simplistic and beautiful. I especially liked the last stanza.
10/26/09
very good job of keeping it simple.