The Official Writing Challenge
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In darkness, it seems, it is easier to see the light and its brilliance. I liked the way you presented this.
10/26/09
Wow--I think anyone who'se been in black will relate to this well-done poem.
10/26/09
The following lines were my favorite, as they helped me relate to the feeling of being "in black on the Lord's Day:"cringing within shadowed soul
wounds weeping
a hearts cry away from God."
Nice job.
10/26/09
how often have we skipped church or some other act of fellowship because of some measure of black in our souls? nicely presented.