The Official Writing Challenge
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The way you've used your words in this apologetic devotional add to the way the theme itself challenges us to consider both light and dark, life and death. Good job
10/26/09
When I read this with the all-caps words emphasized, it felt like a sermon from the pulpit!
10/26/09
Whenever I see the same word or phrase used OVER and OVER and OVER within a given sentence or paragraph, it is very distracting and redundant. I find it difficult to continue reading when this happens.
10/27/09
I liked your method of approach for the contrasts and considered your description of DEATH compelling. Because of the use of the caps and the polemic tone, I felt a little uneasy while reading it. I think that much of the content within the framework of a sermon with a little more background on the motivation and an MC would have added value. Overall solid and courageous entry, good job!