The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/09
This story made me chortle - the miscommunications were comedic prowess. I was, however, a bit confused about the story as a whole: the characters and what else was happening aboard the ship. Excellent comedic touch, it takes a rare talent to carry something like this.
No confusion here. Except for when "The Captains lit." Not sure what that meant. I pictured this as a sketch performed by a couple of old-timers like Harvey Korman & Tim Conway. Which made me laugh even harder. Good job!